jmerk800's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anger]

you really need to work on your flow and delivery man. It sounds like your asking questions when youre trying to deliver your punchlines. expand your vocabulary and ditch the basic and corny lines. The flow doesn't seem to match the beat either. Keep working though, most people don't even have the balls to post shit on here.

lasekx responds:

Thanks bro, I really do appreciate the input.
I've been working on my flow since uploading this and it has gotten better.
I'll be uploading some more content soon though.

[Sonic- Emerald Hill Zone Piano]

Nce!

I remember playing sonic 2 for hours and hours and this just brings me bck to the glory days. Thank you for making this. It's pretty inspiring. 9/10 only because nothing felt like it was really changed to much from the first and same sounds almost. but it doesnt ruin it at all, just my opinion. I am gonna make my own sonic 2 track right now.

DrMackFoxx responds:

Well, the idea was not to stray much from the original song. Just put a different kind of spin on it. :)

At any rate, thank you very much for the review and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this song!

[B7 - I Bleed Fire]

Great!

I've listned to quite a few of your songs now and I have to say you are one of my favorite artists here on newgrounds. I love your metal songs and they take the true form metal is supposed to have. I love playing my guitar and when I hear something like this it makes me pick mine up. Anyway congrats and cant wait to hear more! Your music is an inspiration.

Burn7 responds:

Wow, thanks a ton dude! I love hearing about people that actually come back and check out more stuff and like it all :P

Really, thanks.

[Flow (Original song)]

Neat!

Okay so Genre - I would put this in the techon section. There is not much drum n bass in it.

Ways to improve it - Not a whole lot to say here! The only thing I thought was dragged on in this is the intro build up. maybe a little shorter next time? but thats just me, some other people might disagree.

Overall - I really enjoyed it. It is different in its own way and it is nice to hear something orginal. Keep up the good work man!

John

P.S Favorited

Kadadj responds:

Thanks man, ill be sure to notify you when i finish the song.

[Truth In Dreams (ft. T-Free)]

Congrats

On making one of the best songs I have ever heard! It is very enjoyable, and easy to listen to. This should be #1 of the audio portal and should stay there for quit some time. Thank you for making this!

OMGL33TH4X0R responds:

It got beat out by a song about a stove :( LOL
That's ok, I'm glad you like it :D

[Instrumental Piece 1]

Nice

I enjoyed this piece through and through. Relaxing and sometimes songs such as this get boring but you were able to switch it up enough to keep it fresh and interesting and that is a hard thing to do (in my opinion) In short : Great Job Man!

Gravey responds:

Thank you very much. I agree, it's relaxing but changes enough just to stay interesting. :-)

-Gravey-

[[Fiji]Revival]

good

It is good. just a little um gimicky or unoriginal. You here a lot of trance songs with the same sounds, effects, tempo increases and decreases etc. Still enjoyable though. dont take this the wrong way.

MrFijiWiji responds:

hahaha some people criticize me for not following a basic song structure....
and then some people do...lol... cant satisfy everyone
and the tempo thing? its natural for as song's tempo to go up and down.... if it was the same tempo the whole song wouldn't it be boring?
thanks for the review tho :D

[The Night Crawlers]

Woah!

That was fantastic! I really enjoyed it, it had a modern yet retro feel and it blended perfectly! Keep it up I cant wait for more!
John

MixyRecords responds:

Thanks!

[-Success-]

Very good

This is a very good and hip piece. all of the melody's flow very nicely together and this is VERY enjoyable to listen to. Excellent job! look forward to more. 5/5 9/10 favorite'd u and the song

Two-Shekel responds:

I'm glad to hear it

[City Night]

Could have done better

It is very repetitive. The piano gets old after a while and its just boring. you just need to change it up a little bit other wise it is nice to listen to. Keep it up.

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

you didnt even listen to the whole song if you think its repetitive... the piano changes up but you wouldnt know that cause you didnt lisent to it all the way through.