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you really need to work on your flow and delivery man. It sounds like your asking questions when youre trying to deliver your punchlines. expand your vocabulary and ditch the basic and corny lines. The flow doesn't seem to match the beat either. Keep working though, most people don't even have the balls to post shit on here.

lasekx responds:

Thanks bro, I really do appreciate the input.
I've been working on my flow since uploading this and it has gotten better.
I'll be uploading some more content soon though.

Respect man, I can vibe to this.

Great!

I've listned to quite a few of your songs now and I have to say you are one of my favorite artists here on newgrounds. I love your metal songs and they take the true form metal is supposed to have. I love playing my guitar and when I hear something like this it makes me pick mine up. Anyway congrats and cant wait to hear more! Your music is an inspiration.

Burn7 responds:

Wow, thanks a ton dude! I love hearing about people that actually come back and check out more stuff and like it all :P

Really, thanks.

Neat!

Okay so Genre - I would put this in the techon section. There is not much drum n bass in it.

Ways to improve it - Not a whole lot to say here! The only thing I thought was dragged on in this is the intro build up. maybe a little shorter next time? but thats just me, some other people might disagree.

Overall - I really enjoyed it. It is different in its own way and it is nice to hear something orginal. Keep up the good work man!

John

P.S Favorited

Kadadj responds:

Thanks man, ill be sure to notify you when i finish the song.

Inspiring

While listening to this song my ears had an orgasm. laughing matters aside this song is just amazing! I can't find anything wrong with it! This makes me wanna go bust out a new song right now. which I think I will :D Thank you

Congrats

On making one of the best songs I have ever heard! It is very enjoyable, and easy to listen to. This should be #1 of the audio portal and should stay there for quit some time. Thank you for making this!

OMGL33TH4X0R responds:

It got beat out by a song about a stove :( LOL
That's ok, I'm glad you like it :D

Nice

I enjoyed this piece through and through. Relaxing and sometimes songs such as this get boring but you were able to switch it up enough to keep it fresh and interesting and that is a hard thing to do (in my opinion) In short : Great Job Man!

Gravey responds:

Thank you very much. I agree, it's relaxing but changes enough just to stay interesting. :-)

-Gravey-

My name is John. I reside in Syracuse, New York and I am a music artist here on newgrounds. I hope you enjoy my stuff!

John @jmerk800

Age 29, Male

Student

DeRuyter Central School

New York

Joined on 8/3/08

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